Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Weather Description

The wind sweeping houses off the land.Whoosh!
Clonk Clink!Hail knocking on your window while you are sleeping.
If you look out your window,you can see lightning dancing across the night sky.
Families after families losing homes,because of the furious floods drifting away broken homes.
Cyclones travelling to each country,causing major problems.
Cars sinking to the bottom of the ground while the rain is filled with tears.Drip Drop!

I could hear the tree branches brustling along the walls,so I flicked the light on and.. there was no light!
The ugly,horrible weather ruined the power!
The wind starts to growl, knocking trees of their feet.
People hearing sirens on the roads.
Thunder rumbling with rage.
The thunder goes to each neighbor hood, waking families up annoyingly.

The next day ... ugly weather continues!


  1. What a vivid and exciting piece of writing. I love your use of personification and onomatopoeia. Keep up the good work.

  2. nice alana keep it up